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The Complete IB Extended Essay Guide: Examples, Topics, and Ideas

International Baccalaureate (IB)

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IB students around the globe fear writing the Extended Essay, but it doesn't have to be a source of stress! In this article, I'll get you excited about writing your Extended Essay and provide you with the resources you need to get an A on it.

If you're reading this article, I'm going to assume you're an IB student getting ready to write your Extended Essay. If you're looking at this as a potential future IB student, I recommend reading our introductory IB articles first, including our guide to what the IB program is and our full coverage of the IB curriculum .

IB Extended Essay: Why Should You Trust My Advice?

I myself am a recipient of an IB Diploma, and I happened to receive an A on my IB Extended Essay. Don't believe me? The proof is in the IBO pudding:

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If you're confused by what this report means, EE is short for Extended Essay , and English A1 is the subject that my Extended Essay topic coordinated with. In layman's terms, my IB Diploma was graded in May 2010, I wrote my Extended Essay in the English A1 category, and I received an A grade on it.

What Is the Extended Essay in the IB Diploma Programme?

The IB Extended Essay, or EE , is a mini-thesis you write under the supervision of an IB advisor (an IB teacher at your school), which counts toward your IB Diploma (learn more about the major IB Diploma requirements in our guide) . I will explain exactly how the EE affects your Diploma later in this article.

For the Extended Essay, you will choose a research question as a topic, conduct the research independently, then write an essay on your findings . The essay itself is a long one—although there's a cap of 4,000 words, most successful essays get very close to this limit.

Keep in mind that the IB requires this essay to be a "formal piece of academic writing," meaning you'll have to do outside research and cite additional sources.

The IB Extended Essay must include the following:

  • A title page
  • Contents page
  • Introduction
  • Body of the essay
  • References and bibliography

Additionally, your research topic must fall into one of the six approved DP categories , or IB subject groups, which are as follows:

  • Group 1: Studies in Language and Literature
  • Group 2: Language Acquisition
  • Group 3: Individuals and Societies
  • Group 4: Sciences
  • Group 5: Mathematics
  • Group 6: The Arts

Once you figure out your category and have identified a potential research topic, it's time to pick your advisor, who is normally an IB teacher at your school (though you can also find one online ). This person will help direct your research, and they'll conduct the reflection sessions you'll have to do as part of your Extended Essay.

As of 2018, the IB requires a "reflection process" as part of your EE supervision process. To fulfill this requirement, you have to meet at least three times with your supervisor in what the IB calls "reflection sessions." These meetings are not only mandatory but are also part of the formal assessment of the EE and your research methods.

According to the IB, the purpose of these meetings is to "provide an opportunity for students to reflect on their engagement with the research process." Basically, these meetings give your supervisor the opportunity to offer feedback, push you to think differently, and encourage you to evaluate your research process.

The final reflection session is called the viva voce, and it's a short 10- to 15-minute interview between you and your advisor. This happens at the very end of the EE process, and it's designed to help your advisor write their report, which factors into your EE grade.

Here are the topics covered in your viva voce :

  • A check on plagiarism and malpractice
  • Your reflection on your project's successes and difficulties
  • Your reflection on what you've learned during the EE process

Your completed Extended Essay, along with your supervisor's report, will then be sent to the IB to be graded. We'll cover the assessment criteria in just a moment.

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What Should You Write About in Your IB Extended Essay?

You can technically write about anything, so long as it falls within one of the approved categories listed above.

It's best to choose a topic that matches one of the IB courses , (such as Theatre, Film, Spanish, French, Math, Biology, etc.), which shouldn't be difficult because there are so many class subjects.

Here is a range of sample topics with the attached extended essay:

  • Biology: The Effect of Age and Gender on the Photoreceptor Cells in the Human Retina
  • Chemistry: How Does Reflux Time Affect the Yield and Purity of Ethyl Aminobenzoate (Benzocaine), and How Effective is Recrystallisation as a Purification Technique for This Compound?
  • English: An Exploration of Jane Austen's Use of the Outdoors in Emma
  • Geography: The Effect of Location on the Educational Attainment of Indigenous Secondary Students in Queensland, Australia
  • Math: Alhazen's Billiard Problem
  • Visual Arts: Can Luc Tuymans Be Classified as a Political Painter?

You can see from how varied the topics are that you have a lot of freedom when it comes to picking a topic . So how do you pick when the options are limitless?

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How to Write a Stellar IB Extended Essay: 6 Essential Tips

Below are six key tips to keep in mind as you work on your Extended Essay for the IB DP. Follow these and you're sure to get an A!

#1: Write About Something You Enjoy

You can't expect to write a compelling essay if you're not a fan of the topic on which you're writing. For example, I just love British theatre and ended up writing my Extended Essay on a revolution in post-WWII British theatre. (Yes, I'm definitely a #TheatreNerd.)

I really encourage anyone who pursues an IB Diploma to take the Extended Essay seriously. I was fortunate enough to receive a full-tuition merit scholarship to USC's School of Dramatic Arts program. In my interview for the scholarship, I spoke passionately about my Extended Essay; thus, I genuinely think my Extended Essay helped me get my scholarship.

But how do you find a topic you're passionate about? Start by thinking about which classes you enjoy the most and why . Do you like math classes because you like to solve problems? Or do you enjoy English because you like to analyze literary texts?

Keep in mind that there's no right or wrong answer when it comes to choosing your Extended Essay topic. You're not more likely to get high marks because you're writing about science, just like you're not doomed to failure because you've chosen to tackle the social sciences. The quality of what you produce—not the field you choose to research within—will determine your grade.

Once you've figured out your category, you should brainstorm more specific topics by putting pen to paper . What was your favorite chapter you learned in that class? Was it astrophysics or mechanics? What did you like about that specific chapter? Is there something you want to learn more about? I recommend spending a few hours on this type of brainstorming.

One last note: if you're truly stumped on what to research, pick a topic that will help you in your future major or career . That way you can use your Extended Essay as a talking point in your college essays (and it will prepare you for your studies to come too!).

#2: Select a Topic That Is Neither Too Broad nor Too Narrow

There's a fine line between broad and narrow. You need to write about something specific, but not so specific that you can't write 4,000 words on it.

You can't write about WWII because that would be a book's worth of material. You also don't want to write about what type of soup prisoners of war received behind enemy lines, because you probably won’t be able to come up with 4,000 words of material about it. However, you could possibly write about how the conditions in German POW camps—and the rations provided—were directly affected by the Nazis' successes and failures on the front, including the use of captured factories and prison labor in Eastern Europe to increase production. WWII military history might be a little overdone, but you get my point.

If you're really stuck trying to pinpoint a not-too-broad-or-too-narrow topic, I suggest trying to brainstorm a topic that uses a comparison. Once you begin looking through the list of sample essays below, you'll notice that many use comparisons to formulate their main arguments.

I also used a comparison in my EE, contrasting Harold Pinter's Party Time with John Osborne's Look Back in Anger in order to show a transition in British theatre. Topics with comparisons of two to three plays, books, and so on tend to be the sweet spot. You can analyze each item and then compare them with one another after doing some in-depth analysis of each individually. The ways these items compare and contrast will end up forming the thesis of your essay!

When choosing a comparative topic, the key is that the comparison should be significant. I compared two plays to illustrate the transition in British theatre, but you could compare the ways different regional dialects affect people's job prospects or how different temperatures may or may not affect the mating patterns of lightning bugs. The point here is that comparisons not only help you limit your topic, but they also help you build your argument.

Comparisons are not the only way to get a grade-A EE, though. If after brainstorming, you pick a non-comparison-based topic and are still unsure whether your topic is too broad or narrow, spend about 30 minutes doing some basic research and see how much material is out there.

If there are more than 1,000 books, articles, or documentaries out there on that exact topic, it may be too broad. But if there are only two books that have any connection to your topic, it may be too narrow. If you're still unsure, ask your advisor—it's what they're there for! Speaking of advisors...

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Don't get stuck with a narrow topic!

#3: Choose an Advisor Who Is Familiar With Your Topic

If you're not certain of who you would like to be your advisor, create a list of your top three choices. Next, write down the pros and cons of each possibility (I know this sounds tedious, but it really helps!).

For example, Mr. Green is my favorite teacher and we get along really well, but he teaches English. For my EE, I want to conduct an experiment that compares the efficiency of American electric cars with foreign electric cars.

I had Ms. White a year ago. She teaches physics and enjoyed having me in her class. Unlike Mr. Green, Ms. White could help me design my experiment.

Based on my topic and what I need from my advisor, Ms. White would be a better fit for me than would Mr. Green (even though I like him a lot).

The moral of my story is this: do not just ask your favorite teacher to be your advisor . They might be a hindrance to you if they teach another subject. For example, I would not recommend asking your biology teacher to guide you in writing an English literature-based EE.

There can, of course, be exceptions to this rule. If you have a teacher who's passionate and knowledgeable about your topic (as my English teacher was about my theatre topic), you could ask that instructor. Consider all your options before you do this. There was no theatre teacher at my high school, so I couldn't find a theatre-specific advisor, but I chose the next best thing.

Before you approach a teacher to serve as your advisor, check with your high school to see what requirements they have for this process. Some IB high schools require your IB Extended Essay advisor to sign an Agreement Form , for instance.

Make sure that you ask your IB coordinator whether there is any required paperwork to fill out. If your school needs a specific form signed, bring it with you when you ask your teacher to be your EE advisor.

#4: Pick an Advisor Who Will Push You to Be Your Best

Some teachers might just take on students because they have to and aren't very passionate about reading drafts, only giving you minimal feedback. Choose a teacher who will take the time to read several drafts of your essay and give you extensive notes. I would not have gotten my A without being pushed to make my Extended Essay draft better.

Ask a teacher that you have experience with through class or an extracurricular activity. Do not ask a teacher that you have absolutely no connection to. If a teacher already knows you, that means they already know your strengths and weaknesses, so they know what to look for, where you need to improve, and how to encourage your best work.

Also, don't forget that your supervisor's assessment is part of your overall EE score . If you're meeting with someone who pushes you to do better—and you actually take their advice—they'll have more impressive things to say about you than a supervisor who doesn't know you well and isn't heavily involved in your research process.

Be aware that the IB only allows advisors to make suggestions and give constructive criticism. Your teacher cannot actually help you write your EE. The IB recommends that the supervisor spends approximately two to three hours in total with the candidate discussing the EE.

#5: Make Sure Your Essay Has a Clear Structure and Flow

The IB likes structure. Your EE needs a clear introduction (which should be one to two double-spaced pages), research question/focus (i.e., what you're investigating), a body, and a conclusion (about one double-spaced page). An essay with unclear organization will be graded poorly.

The body of your EE should make up the bulk of the essay. It should be about eight to 18 pages long (again, depending on your topic). Your body can be split into multiple parts. For example, if you were doing a comparison, you might have one third of your body as Novel A Analysis, another third as Novel B Analysis, and the final third as your comparison of Novels A and B.

If you're conducting an experiment or analyzing data, such as in this EE , your EE body should have a clear structure that aligns with the scientific method ; you should state the research question, discuss your method, present the data, analyze the data, explain any uncertainties, and draw a conclusion and/or evaluate the success of the experiment.

#6: Start Writing Sooner Rather Than Later!

You will not be able to crank out a 4,000-word essay in just a week and get an A on it. You'll be reading many, many articles (and, depending on your topic, possibly books and plays as well!). As such, it's imperative that you start your research as soon as possible.

Each school has a slightly different deadline for the Extended Essay. Some schools want them as soon as November of your senior year; others will take them as late as February. Your school will tell you what your deadline is. If they haven't mentioned it by February of your junior year, ask your IB coordinator about it.

Some high schools will provide you with a timeline of when you need to come up with a topic, when you need to meet with your advisor, and when certain drafts are due. Not all schools do this. Ask your IB coordinator if you are unsure whether you are on a specific timeline.

Below is my recommended EE timeline. While it's earlier than most schools, it'll save you a ton of heartache (trust me, I remember how hard this process was!):

  • January/February of Junior Year: Come up with your final research topic (or at least your top three options).
  • February of Junior Year: Approach a teacher about being your EE advisor. If they decline, keep asking others until you find one. See my notes above on how to pick an EE advisor.
  • April/May of Junior Year: Submit an outline of your EE and a bibliography of potential research sources (I recommend at least seven to 10) to your EE advisor. Meet with your EE advisor to discuss your outline.
  • Summer Between Junior and Senior Year: Complete your first full draft over the summer between your junior and senior year. I know, I know—no one wants to work during the summer, but trust me—this will save you so much stress come fall when you are busy with college applications and other internal assessments for your IB classes. You will want to have this first full draft done because you will want to complete a couple of draft cycles as you likely won't be able to get everything you want to say into 4,000 articulate words on the first attempt. Try to get this first draft into the best possible shape so you don't have to work on too many revisions during the school year on top of your homework, college applications, and extracurriculars.
  • August/September of Senior Year: Turn in your first draft of your EE to your advisor and receive feedback. Work on incorporating their feedback into your essay. If they have a lot of suggestions for improvement, ask if they will read one more draft before the final draft.
  • September/October of Senior Year: Submit the second draft of your EE to your advisor (if necessary) and look at their feedback. Work on creating the best possible final draft.
  • November-February of Senior Year: Schedule your viva voce. Submit two copies of your final draft to your school to be sent off to the IB. You likely will not get your grade until after you graduate.

Remember that in the middle of these milestones, you'll need to schedule two other reflection sessions with your advisor . (Your teachers will actually take notes on these sessions on a form like this one , which then gets submitted to the IB.)

I recommend doing them when you get feedback on your drafts, but these meetings will ultimately be up to your supervisor. Just don't forget to do them!

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The early bird DOES get the worm!

How Is the IB Extended Essay Graded?

Extended Essays are graded by examiners appointed by the IB on a scale of 0 to 34 . You'll be graded on five criteria, each with its own set of points. You can learn more about how EE scoring works by reading the IB guide to extended essays .

  • Criterion A: Focus and Method (6 points maximum)
  • Criterion B: Knowledge and Understanding (6 points maximum)
  • Criterion C: Critical Thinking (12 points maximum)
  • Criterion D: Presentation (4 points maximum)
  • Criterion E: Engagement (6 points maximum)

How well you do on each of these criteria will determine the final letter grade you get for your EE. You must earn at least a D to be eligible to receive your IB Diploma.

Although each criterion has a point value, the IB explicitly states that graders are not converting point totals into grades; instead, they're using qualitative grade descriptors to determine the final grade of your Extended Essay . Grade descriptors are on pages 102-103 of this document .

Here's a rough estimate of how these different point values translate to letter grades based on previous scoring methods for the EE. This is just an estimate —you should read and understand the grade descriptors so you know exactly what the scorers are looking for.

30-34 Excellent: A
25-29 Good: B
17-24 Satisfactory: C
9-16 Mediocre: D
0-8 Elementary: E

Here is the breakdown of EE scores (from the May 2021 bulletin):

A 10.1%
B 24.4%
C 40.8%
D 22.5%
E 1.4%
N (No Grade Awarded) 0.7%

How Does the Extended Essay Grade Affect Your IB Diploma?

The Extended Essay grade is combined with your TOK (Theory of Knowledge) grade to determine how many points you get toward your IB Diploma.

To learn about Theory of Knowledge or how many points you need to receive an IB Diploma, read our complete guide to the IB program and our guide to the IB Diploma requirements .

This diagram shows how the two scores are combined to determine how many points you receive for your IB diploma (3 being the most, 0 being the least). In order to get your IB Diploma, you have to earn 24 points across both categories (the TOK and EE). The highest score anyone can earn is 45 points.

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Let's say you get an A on your EE and a B on TOK. You will get 3 points toward your Diploma. As of 2014, a student who scores an E on either the extended essay or TOK essay will not be eligible to receive an IB Diploma .

Prior to the class of 2010, a Diploma candidate could receive a failing grade in either the Extended Essay or Theory of Knowledge and still be awarded a Diploma, but this is no longer true.

Figuring out how you're assessed can be a little tricky. Luckily, the IB breaks everything down here in this document . (The assessment information begins on page 219.)

40+ Sample Extended Essays for the IB Diploma Programme

In case you want a little more guidance on how to get an A on your EE, here are over 40 excellent (grade A) sample extended essays for your reading pleasure. Essays are grouped by IB subject.

  • Business Management 1
  • Chemistry 1
  • Chemistry 2
  • Chemistry 3
  • Chemistry 4
  • Chemistry 5
  • Chemistry 6
  • Chemistry 7
  • Computer Science 1
  • Economics 1
  • Design Technology 1
  • Design Technology 2
  • Environmental Systems and Societies 1
  • Geography 1
  • Geography 2
  • Geography 3
  • Geography 4
  • Geography 5
  • Geography 6
  • Literature and Performance 1
  • Mathematics 1
  • Mathematics 2
  • Mathematics 3
  • Mathematics 4
  • Mathematics 5
  • Philosophy 1
  • Philosophy 2
  • Philosophy 3
  • Philosophy 4
  • Philosophy 5
  • Psychology 1
  • Psychology 2
  • Psychology 3
  • Psychology 4
  • Psychology 5
  • Social and Cultural Anthropology 1
  • Social and Cultural Anthropology 2
  • Social and Cultural Anthropology 3
  • Sports, Exercise and Health Science 1
  • Sports, Exercise and Health Science 2
  • Visual Arts 1
  • Visual Arts 2
  • Visual Arts 3
  • Visual Arts 4
  • Visual Arts 5
  • World Religion 1
  • World Religion 2
  • World Religion 3

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How to Write IB Extended Essay Reflection

Under the extended essay criteria for ‘Engagement’, students are awarded a maximum 6 marks out of 34 for writing the a 500 word reflection on the Planning, Research, and Writing phases of their EE. This means the reflections are worth 19% of the total EE score, and can often swing a your score from a B to A. We will review the EE reflection rubrics and explain what it takes to score maximum marks for this component.

According to the International Baccalaureate (IB), Reflection in the EE focuses on the student’s progress during the Planning, Research and Writing process. It is intended to help students with the development of their EE as well as allowing them the opportunity consider the effectiveness of their methodology and decide whether changes are needed along the way.

For the first reflection- Planning

You should discuss how you started the EE, framed your research question, and reflect on the decisions you have made. The first reflection should provide a critical evaluation of the initial decision-making, research process, methodology, and appropriate sources of data collection. Some examples of what to discuss include

  • How will I begin the research process?
  • Do I have access to appropriate sources?
  • Are my chosen research methods appropriate for the subject I have chosen to complete it in?

It is important to not just describe what you have done. Instead, reflect on your thinking process. Did you make the right decisions? What challenges have you faced in the initial stages of your research and how did you overcome them? More importantly, how would you change your planning the next time you do a research like this?

For the interim reflection- Writing

In this second reflection, a student must review the progress that he or she has made in the research. Effective reflection highlights the journey a student has taken to engage in an intellectual and personal process. The reflection should present challenges faced in data collection, content generation, and how you intend to overcome them. For instance, will you reformulate the research question, or will you consider other sources of data collection? Examiners love it when students explain significant challenges and demonstrate good ability to sidestep them. This learning process should be well documented and your reflection stands out if you can explain this in your own voice, demonstrate the discovery and evolution of conceptual understandings and skills development. The IB wants to see how you have evidenced the rationale for decisions made throughout the planning process and the skills and understandings developed. Some examples of what to discuss include

  • If I do not have sufficient data/information, how will I go about resolving this? Can it be resolved?
  • To what extent does the data/information I have relate to my proposed research question?
  • Given the data/information I have collected, do I need to reformulate my research question?
  • Has the data/information collected taken me in an unexpected direction?
  • Do I have a reasoned argument that can be sustained throughout the essay?
  • Am I able to make coherent links between different points made and the evidence presented?
  • To what extent have I answered my research question?

For the final reflection- Viva voce

The final reflection is written after the EE is submitted. You will not be allowed to make further changes to the EE at this point. Thus, this reflection is a post-essay reflection. You should discuss what you have learned about your topic, how you undertook the entire research process. What, if any questions emerged as a result of the research that you were not expecting? Most importantly, critically evaluate your own learning, as well as outline any new questions you have uncovered and how you found a solution for them- if any. Conclude by examining how you would do this research differently- if you were to do it again. Some examples of what to discuss include

  • To what extent has my thinking been confirmed or changed about my chosen topic as a result of my research?
  • What strategies did I employ that proved particularly effective in the research process?
  • What skills have I developed and how might these be useful in the future?
  • What improvements might I suggest to my own working practices?
  • How might different research strategies have impacted my outcomes?

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Gr. 11-12 Extended Essay

  • Reflections Overview

#1: First Mandatory Reflection

#2: interim reflection, #3: the viva voce, tips for the reflection process.

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  • Draft a Research Question
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Students are required to conduct three mandatory reflection sessions with their supervisors. The reflections make up  Criterion E (Engagement) , worth  6 points  of the 34 points possible.

  • Students must upload their reflections in the Planning and Progress Form on ManageBac
  • The three reflections together consist of  500 words  (The first 500 words only are eligible for assessment)

While there is no specific "due date" for these sessions, the mandatory reflections should fall roughly in the beginning, middle, and end stages of the EE process:

  • Initial Reflection -- Initial stages of reading & research
  • Interim Reflection -- substantial outline has been drafted, some text written
  • Viva Voce -- after final EE has been submitted

Approximately  150 words.

Reflection prompts:

  • What am I interested in researching and why? Is there sufficient focus to my research area?
  • Given the initial reading I have undertaken on the subject, is my research question appropriate for the subject I am submitting my EE in?
  • Is my research question manageable within the word limit of the EE?
  • Will my research question allow me to think critically about the topic I am researching? How might I change my research question to allow for more critical thinking? 
  • What questions are emerging? Are these similar or different to my initial questions?
  • Are my chosen topic and research methods appropriate for the subject I have chosen to complete it in?
  • How might I go about undertaking this research?
  • Do I have sufficient knowledge of the subject area to fulfill the criteria of an EE?
  • Do I have access to appropriate sources?
  • Are there any ethical issues I need to consider before pursuing this area of research?
  • Are there any challenges that I need to overcome in order to achieve my desired outcomes?
  • Do I have sufficient data/information to begin formulating an argument?
  • If I do not have sufficient data/information, how will I go about resolving this? Can it be resolved?
  • To what extent does the data/information I have relate to my proposed research question?
  • Given the data/information I have collected, do I need to reformulate my research question?
  • Has the data/information collected taken me in an unexpected direction?
  • Do I want to change course now? Is it too late?
  • Are there still questions/issues that I am unclear on how to resolve?
  • Am I keeping to a schedule with the writing process?
  • Do I have a reasoned argument that can be sustained throughout the essay?
  • Am I able to make coherent links between different points made and the evidence presented?
  • To what extent have I answered my research question?
  • What reasons may have affected my ability to answer my research question?
  • If I have been selective in the evidence presented in my essay, can I justify my choices?
  • Is there a clear summative conclusion, and does this reflect the discussion that has taken place?
  • To what extent do I think I have fulfilled the expectations of the extended essay as a task?
  • Has my research resulted in me changing my perspective or views on the topic in question?
  • What strategies have I employed that have worked particularly well at this stage of the process?

This is a  concluding interview ( 20-30 minutes ) to reflect on your growth as a learner throughout the EE journey, the skills you developed, and the challenges you faced.

Approximately 2 00 words.

  • To what extent has my thinking been confirmed or changed about my chosen topic as a result of my research?
  • What strategies did I employ that proved particularly effective in the research process?
  • What skills have I developed and how might these be useful in the future?
  • What improvements might I suggest to my own working practices?
  • How might different research strategies have impacted my outcomes?
  • What did I learn about myself as a learner in this process?

In critically reviewing your engagement in the research process, it might help to think in terms of three levels of reflection: descriptive , analytical and  evaluative reflection. The table below gives examples of guiding questions to help with this:

Level of description Example of the kinds of questions students may have asked and answered of themselves
Descriptive
Analytical
Evaluative

These levels correspond to the attainment levels of the rubric for Criterion E (Engagement) . Try to ensure that your reflections go beyond the 'descriptive' and engage with some of the analytical and evaluative questions listed above.

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How Do You Write IB Extended Essay Reflections? (Quick Guide)

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The IB Extended Essay reflections are worth 17.6%, which is an equivalent of 6 out of the 35 marks of the EE assignment.

You will need to write 3 reflections in 500 words to show the authenticity of your work by demonstrating your thinking, decision making, and planning.

When your teacher looks at your EE reflections, they should see the approach you used to write the Extended Essay.

Your reflections should do more than just show a personal engagement. They should also demonstrate your intellectual approach to writing your Extended Essay .

In this lesson, you will learn how to write an IB EE reflection that scores the 6 marks. Since these 6 marks can be the difference between a C and an A, it’s important to pay close attention to the information below.

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How to Write the First, Second, and Third IB Extended Essay Reflections 

The information below will help you to write comprehensive 500-word EE reflections that score 5 to 6 marks.

1. Demonstrate Your Thinking and Explain Your Research Process

Since your teacher expects you to demonstrate your thinking and explain your research process, it helps to reflect on more than just what you’ve done.

Start by reflecting on the decisions you made.

  • How easy or difficult was it for you to make a research decision?
  • Did you make any poor decisions in your research process?
  • What decisions did you find difficult to make? How did you deal with these decision-making issues?

As you reflect on the above questions, you may want to discuss what you would have done differently (or better than you did) in your research process.

Because the IB EE guide encourages students to write the reflection in their own voice, feel free to write yours in your own words.

2. Write in a Natural Tone

Do you feel stuck on the kind of tone to use for your Extended Essay reflection? Or maybe you’re worried that what you’ve already written doesn’t sound too academic?

Fortunately, you don’t have to overthink this.

According to the IB EE Guide , the reflection focuses on the progress you make during planning, researching, and writing.

It shows the development of your essay, demonstrate the effectiveness of your research, and examine your ideas to determine whether changes are necessary.

Since the reflection focuses on your experience and shows the authenticity of your work, the guide encourages you to use your own voice to write the reflections. In other word, you can explain your journey in a natural voice.

3. Reflect on Your Mistakes

You can’t get your research and writing 100% right. As a student bound to make mistakes along the way, it’s important to reflect on what you did wrong and what lessons you’ve learned from those mistakes.

Teachers love this kind of reflection because it shows them that you can learn from your mistake and you’re willing to improve.

4. Demonstrate How You’ve Done Your Research

A wrong approach to writing an IB Extended Essay reflection is to make it look like it was easy to find relevant information for the EE.

You should show that you invested your time in research and state that you were careful when choosing your sources.

Your reflection should show that you have looked deeply into the information you used to answer your research question.

In addition to explaining your research process, you should reflect on how you planned your Extended Essay.

Below are a few questions that can help you get this right:

  • How well did you plan your essay?
  • Were you successful in planning the right aspects of your IB Extended Essay?
  • Do you feel as if you over-planned or under-planned your work?
  • How easy was the planning phase?
  • What are the most critical challenges that you faced when creating a plan for your EE and how did you overcome these difficulties?

Also, your reflections should show how you would do things differently if you ever have to do a similar research next time.

5. Show that You Did More than Your Teacher Asked

Your teacher expects you to do exactly as they have instructed, but you stand a chance to earn more marks if you go the extra mile to demonstrate that you have taken a full lead on your research.

Going that extra mile not only shows that you have looked into the topic as asked but also shows why you think the topic is interesting and important to explore even far beyond what your teacher expect to see.

You can take the lead on the research by looking into related questions and further analyze how relevant they’re to your research question.

Doing so shows your teacher that you invested a lot of your time and effort to make your Extended Essay great.

Tips for Writing Extended Essay Reflections for the 6 Marks

If you look at Page 154 of the IB Extended Essay Guide , you’ll see that it gives you some ideas on what you can reflect on. You are free to reflect on:

  • The approach and strategies you chose for the research, how they worked, and whether they were effective
  • The most critical questions that emerged from your research
  • The challenges you encountered in your research and the approach you used to overcome them
  • Exactly what you would do differently if you were to do your research again
  • How your EE research has developed your approach to learning in the areas of social skills, self-management, communication, thinking, and research.
  • How you developed your conceptual understanding – or how your understanding changed based as you continued to develop your research.

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Extended Essay: Step 3. Researcher's Reflection Space (RRS)

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Researcher's Reflection Space (RRS)

The Researcher's Reflection Space (RRS ) is a personal learning environment that can be either a physical or virtual support tool - like a research or process journal  You use it to record reflections on what you are reading, writing and thinking. The use of the RRS will help you prepare for your reflection sessions with your supervisor and inform the discussions that take place.

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  • record your reflections
  • respond to items that have come up in your research, such as photos, newspaper clippings, twitter feeds, blogs, and so on
  • respond to prompts and questions that may arise in your subject area, TOK class or other aspects of the Diploma Programme
  • create MindMaps ®
  • record emerging questions

You may already be keeping a research journal on the planning, researching and writing phases of your work on the extended essay - that's your RRS!   Having a RRS will provide you benefits in terms of the management of your workload and focus on your extended essay. 

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For more ideas on how to record your thoughts and ideas, see:

Researcher's Reflection Space (RRS) examples

Online Note-taking Tools:   Avidnote , and  Evernote

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Once you have decided on which IB subject to use for your Extended Essay, you need to choose a topic - something that you can write 4,000 words about and something that will keep you interested and engaged.  For help with this, see Step 4. Choose a Topic.

Avidnote enables researchers to take more efficient notes. Users can keep research notes, lab notes, field notes and study notes secure, organized, easily searchable, and always accessible.  Avidnote is free for individual use. The free individual license gives registered users full access to use the app. Users own all the data/content that they store on Avidnote, and can retrieve, change, or delete that data/content anytime they wish.

Watch the video tutorial below to learn how to use Avidnote.

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Watch this video from the Center for Technology in Learning and Teaching at Iowa State University for an introduction to how you can use Evernote to organize your research.

How To Use Evernote 2020: A Complete Evernote Tutorial For Beginners, 20 Sep. 2019. Web. 8 Jan. 2021.       <https://youtu.be/kSz9uavfLpI>.

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Twelve-step Plan for Researching the Extended Essay - Step 3

3. Set up the Researcher's Reflection Space (RRS) and use this as the key planning and reflection tool for the extended essay process.

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Researcher's Reflection Space (RRS) Examples

The following are examples of the different ways students can use their RSS to help with planning and writing their essays.

  • RRS Example A - Studies in Language and Literature
  • RRS Example B - World Studies
  • RRS Example C - Studies in Language and Literature
  • RRS Example D - History
  • RRS Example E - History
  • RRS Example F - Economics
  • RRS Example G - Mathematics
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Criterion E (Engagement) is worth 18% of your final mark and will be largely assessed through your reflections on the Reflections in Planning and Progress form, so it is vital to practise this skill.

On this page you will find information on:

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  • What should I put in my Researcher's Reflection Space
  • Where should I keep my Researcher's Reflection Space
  • Reflections on Planning and Progress Form
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What is a Researcher's Reflection Space?

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While not a compulsory, assessed element of the EE, the RSS is very important because it will help you to understand and talk about the choices you make and paths you choose. This will not only help you to write reflections for your Reflections on Planning and Progress Form, but will actually support you in developing all the skills and attitudes that you need to become a better inquirer - something which can potentially have a huge impact on the rest of your life.

What should I put in my Researcher's Reflection Space?

Diary

  • A diary or log of your reflections. Remember it is as important (if not more important) to reflect on what is going wrong or proving frustrating and what you plan to do about it, as it is to reflect on your successes.
  • Paperwork you used to help you to make decisions, such as the Using with Subject-Specific Guidelines table, the Supervisor Application Form and the Research Proposal Form , along with notes of any changes of direction you have made and why, and drafts you have made for the Reflections on Planning and Progress Form.
  • Notes from any meetings with your supervisor or conversations with your subject teachers about your EE.
  • A record of emerging questions and new lines of inquiry. Your final question will usually emerge out of your investigation, so it is important to track how it changes as you understand your topic better.
  • A record of the resources you have found to support your inquiry and your thoughts about them - the Annotated Bibliography is excellent for this
  • More detailled notes on individual resources - the Investigative Journal is designed for this. You might also want to annotate copies of aricles (either on paper or on printouts in OneNote for example)
  • A record of search strategies and/or data collection methods you used and how successful they were. The Keyword Record might be helpful here.

There is no fixed way to do this - it is YOUR Researcher's Reflection Space. You might use Mind maps, lists, tables, diagrams or blocks of text. You might want to annotate or highlight documents in different colours, or make separate notes. Find something that works for you - but make sure you keep your notes organised so that they make sense to you!

Discussion

  • How your planning is going
  • What you are learning - about the topic, but more importantly about the process
  • Whether you are on track and how you should proceed

Where should I keep my Researcher's Reflection Space?

The Researchers Reflection Space is YOUR tool for recording your thinking, and you need to do this in a way that works best for you.

You might use:

Notebook

A notebook: while you could use a notebook like a diary to write down your reflections, you are also going to want somewhere to store printed documents relating to your EE, and electronic notes (such as URLs).

Folders

A folder: This is a great way to store all the paperwork relating to your EE, including handwritten notes, forms and printouts of articles. Make sure you use dividers and think carefully about how you organise it though.

But you are likely to want to use at least one online method to store notes too. This will be particularly important when you start the investigate stage of your inquiry and need somewhere to store dowloaded articles and links. You might use:

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If you decide to keep your Researchers Reflection Space on a computer's hard drive you MUST take regular back ups. You should never keep it on just a single hard drive or memory stick.

While you can use the school network, you may find this difficult to access during holiday periods and you should NEVER save anything important directly to your desktop on the school network.

OneDrive

OneDrive  is useful If you just want to save a series of documents (one of which might be your Reflective Journal) . It is very similar to using a computer hard drive or memory stick but is cloud based so you can access it from anywhere and it does not need to be backed up.

It is still very important to use a sensible folder structure and filenames so that you can find your documents again.

There are instructions at the bottom of this page for saving documents to OneDrive directly from Office 365, and uploading documents of any type to OneDrive.

OneNote

See graphic below for how to access this.

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Regardless of how you choose to set up your RRS, the most important thing is what you put into it...

Saving to OneDrive from within Office 365

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RRS Examples

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There are many different ways students can use their RSS to help with planning and writing their essays. Here are some excellent examples of RRS entries from West Sound Academy in Washington State in the US: 

RRS Example G - Mathematics

RRS Example from IB Website

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Extended Essay: First Reflection Session

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  • Sessions should last 20-30 minutes.
  • Your conversation should be centered around the progress you've made and planning your next steps.
  • Where are you in the process? Why did you decide on this topic? How strong is your research question? What do you need to do next?

Following this first session, the student is required to complete the first student reflection section of the Planning and Progress tab in ManageBac. The entry should be 150 words or less and be completed by March 25, 2018.  Please note that I've provided sample reflections below on the example RPPF forms.

Feel free to send me any other questions you have!

Students: Preparing for your First Reflection Session

Based on the EE Guide, page 60:

At Omaha Central, the first reflection takes place after the student has selected a subject, topic and written a working research question and after the supervisor has completed supervisor training.

As preparation for their first reflection session, students should do the following. 1. Read the subject-specific section of the Extended essay guide for the subject they are interested in, paying particular attention to the nature of the subject and the treatment of the topic. 2. Undertake further background reading and begin to gather information around their area of interest. This exploration should give rise to a variety of topics and questions that students can consider for further research. At this stage it is important that students consider the availability of reliable and valid sources for the topic under consideration.  3. Begin developing a research proposal which might include a MindMap® of ideas, an annotated article or preliminary bibliography. Additionally, students must already be thinking in terms of the following questions. • Is my topic appropriate for the subject I am considering? • Why am I interested in this area and why is it important? • What possible questions have emerged from my initial reading? • Are there any ethical issues that I need to consider? • What possible methods or approaches might be used for research in this area and why?

Sample RPPFs by Subject Area

Here are a few sample RPPFs -- provided so you can see what other students have written for their required Extended Essay reflections. You may use these as inspiration -- but keep in mind that we don't know how these reflections were scored!

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  • Sample History RPPF
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Supervisors: The First Reflection Session

From the EE Guide, pg 61.

This initial reflection session should be a dialogue between the student and the supervisor based on the student’s initial explorations. It is recommended that the student have selected a subject, narrowed their topic and crafted a working research question before the meeting. They may have begun to construct a research proposal, which is due April 9, 2018,  and which will be sent to the supervisor when it is completed.

Topics of discussion that should arise during this session include: • a review of the requirements and assessment criteria for the subject • a review of ethical and legal implications, if applicable • a dialogue about possible approaches and any potential problems that might arise • a discussion of strategies for developing the student’s ideas for the essay and expanding the research so that the essay starts to take form • probing and challenging questions that will help the student focus their thinking; this should lead to the development of the student’s working research question • an outline of the next steps that the student should undertake in order to refine their question; this should take the form of a research and writing timeline.

Note: This is the first of three FORMAL reflection sessions. Other "check-in" sessions will likely be needed between formal sessions, particularly after the supervisor has reviewed the student's research proposal.

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With a little guidance, every candidate should be able to score top marks on Criterion E: Engagement, which is based on the Reflections on Planning and Progress Form ( RPPF ). Reflection is an art form. And like any art form it can be learned. Below is a rather mediocre RPPF in the left column. In the right column, an experienced examiner has provided comments. Try to learn from these comments before writing your own RPPF comments or commenting on other RPPFs. 

First reflection 

Student's reflections Examiner's comments
Children’s art is not well known as a source of inspiration for artists, since it is often not seen as art. However the CoBrA artists recognized the unique aspects of children’s art. There's no reason to explain 'how the world works' in an . These sweeping generalisations do not show reflection on planning or progress.
I know that they used it as a source inspiration for their own work, because I learned about this during a visit to the CoBrA Museum in Amstelveen. In this light, I wonder how children’s art inspired the CoBrA artists. It's good to write about one's source of inspiration in the first reflection. A sense of wondering shows engagement with the topic.
I also have an aunt who is a child psychologist, and I know that she uses children’s drawings as a means of getting to know her patients. I wonder what she would think of these works of art by Noiret, Appel and Corneille. Again a sense of wondering is good. But it's not clear yet where this essay is going. So it is difficult to determine the value of the opinions of a child psychologist, as a secondary source.
I have spoken with my , who is my visual arts teacher. She has suggested that I go to the CoBrA Museum again, visit the Stedelijk Museum as well, do some simple online research, and try to formulate a good for the next session. Watch out for words like 'simple', as this belittles the research process (and the Criterion E is about overcoming challenges). It's good to comment on the role of one's . It's also good to end the comment box with the future tense. What will happen next and why?

Interim reflection 

Student's reflections Examiner's comments
I have narrowed down my with the help of my . At first I wanted to study CoBrA works as a backlash to the WWII, inspired by Paul Klee and his view of WWI. I wanted to do a pyscho-analysis of their works of art, as a modern-day psychologist would analyse children’s drawings. It's good to comment on how one's understanding of the research project has changed and why it has changed. But it's not clear from these comments why the psycho-analytical approach was inappropriate for the scope of research. What interests the candidate about the art as a response to war? That would be good to explore.
My ’s advice, to ‘keep it simple’, led me to focus more on the works of one artist, Paul Klee. She also told me that there’s a special exhibition going on there now on his work specifically. From these comments, it seems that the candidate is simply doing what the says. Even if this is the case, candidates should focus on why the 's advice is valuable. If 'keep it simple' is the advice, comment on what was unnecessarily complex (such as multiple artists and pscho-analysis).
I’ve already seen some of his works online through a simple Google search, and I’m fascinated by his use of simple abstractions, light and colour. I’m going to focus on the exact aspects of children’s art that inspired him, such as the importance of memory, imagination and life, and show how his art inspired other artists during the CoBrA movement. This should have been the first line of the first reflection. References to 'abstractions, light and colour' cleary show an appreciation of the primary source. Furthermore, showing how one artist inspired other artists is a good method for analytical essays in the languages and arts.
My aunt has helped me acquire some typical drawings made by children, and we’ve had conversations about what typifies children’s style. I will go back to the CoBrA Museum to find evidence of this style in Klee’s artwork this weekend. Oh no! What happened to 'keep it simple'? It's not clear why consulting the aunt is valuable to the research. Although this is not an empirical essay, searching for evidence to support one's hypothesis is exactly scientific. It's good to end the comment box in the future tense. Note that this interim reflection has not evaluated any secondary sources, which should happen by this point.

Final reflection (Viva voce)

Student's reflections Examiner's comments
After I visited the Paul Klee exhibition in Amstelveen, the essay seemed to write itself. It was difficult to narrow down my research to a few paintings, because there were so many great ones. It's good to see how this essay is becomes more focused throughout the process. Note that the reasons for excluding psychology and the aunt are not made explicit.
At first I went a little overboard on Klee, and my reminded me to connect him to later CoBrA artists. Why does Klee need to be connected to CoBra artists, besides the reminder from the ?
I found that it was easy to comment on Karel Appel though, because it’s so easy to see how he was inspired by Klee, and how Klee was inspired by children’s art. Is the connection between Appel and Klee really so easy to make? What is easy about it?
I also found it easier to write the essay once I knew that I would focus on certain aspects of children’s art that were typical of their drawings, such as spontaneity, freedom, colours, style and angles. Again it's good to see an apprciation of the primary source. This realisation may be too little too late. Ideally this kind of learning curve should be experienced in the initial steps. On the other hand: better late than never. This comment is very much on target for Criterion E.
Once I broke down my EE into smaller chunks of research and writing, I found it easier to write. It would have been nice to read more about the writing process. What 'chunks' were to big? What is meant by 'chunks' exactly? 

If you read Criterion E: Engagement carefully you will notice several references to the 'Approaches to Teachaing and Learning' (ATLs), such as 'conceptual understanding and skill development' and 'engagement with the research'. When writing comments on the RPPF , refer to the ATLs.

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EE Tips for Completing the Reflections (RPPF Form)

Travis Dixon November 26, 2020 Extended Essay

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Giving students an empty space and saying, “reflect” can be really challenging. This is why I like to give a few possible ideas of what they could write about. These are explained below. 

The RPPF (Reflections on Planning and Progress Form) is where EE students write their three reflections: First, Interim and Final (after the viva voce). The maximum word count for all three reflections combined is 500 words and should be recorded on the most recent version of the RPPF Form.

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Your school’s IB Coordinator can help you with the RPPF if you need it.

The RPPF is a chance for EE students to show one or more of the following:

  • Intellectual, creative, personal, and/or developmental growth,
  • How actively engaged they are in the learning process ,
  • What they have learned about how to learn and research and/or how they have grown as a learner,
  • critical thinking,
  • decision-making,
  • general research,
  • referencing and citations,
  • specific research methodology,
  • time management.
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The following suggestions have been created using information from the EE guide (pg. 55) to help students write their reflections.

First Reflection

This should be completed after your initial reflection session with your supervisor. 

Possible topics to discuss in this section of the RPPF include (but are not limited to) your thoughts on:

  • Your initial topic exploration,
  • The topic you have chosen and why,
  • Possible sources and methods,
  • What you might hope to learn or achieve from studying this topic,
  • Possible ideas of how you might answer your question and/or research the answer,
  • Questions or challenges faced so far,
  • Anything else you feel could show your engagement, learning, growth or initiative.
Remember that the total word count for all three reflections is 500 words. This means about 140-170 words is perfect for each reflection.

Interim Reflection

This should be completed after your interim reflection session with your supervisor. 

  • The research so far, including reactions to specific things you’ve learned or discovered,
  • How your research (including your research question) changed or developed,
  • Things you’ve learned about the topic and/or research process,
  • Progress in the timeline for completing the essay,
  • Possible outlines of arguments being made in response to your RQ,
  • Challenges encountered and strategies used to overcome them,

Final Reflection

This should be completed after your viva voce (final) reflection session with your supervisor. 

  • The personal significance of the work to you as a student,
  • What you have learned about the topic,
  • What you have learned about learning and/or how you have “grown” as a learner,
  • New questions you have about your topic,

If you have questions post them to our Facebook group for IB Psych Students or our Facebook group for IB Psych Teachers .

Travis Dixon

Travis Dixon is an IB Psychology teacher, author, workshop leader, examiner and IA moderator.

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Extended Essay - Criteria: Interim reflection

  • Criterion A: Focus and Method
  • Criterion B: Knowledge and Understanding
  • Criterion C: Critical Thinking
  • Table of Contents
  • Citations and Referencing
  • Appendices (Optional)
  • Initial reflection
  • Interim reflection
  • Interim Reflection Handout

Between the Interim Reflection and the completion of the extended essay, students should continue to see their supervisor as appropriate.

Interim Reflection

DO NOT MENTION YOUR SUPERIVOR'S NAME in your reflection.

The interim, or second, reflection session takes place before the first full draft is completed, but after a substantial amount of work has been done. The first step is a mandatory interview between the student and the supervisor. The questions asked during this session tend to be more analytical, with a discussion of the strengths and limitations of initial findings and research methods. This interview informs the second written reflection.

Interview Session

INTERVIEW SESSION (20–30 minutes)

During this interview session supervisors might ask:

  • Where are you now in the research process and how did you get there?
  • What challenges have you faced and what strategies have you used to overcome these?
  • How are you adhering to the academic honesty policy?
  • How has your understanding of the question/topic changed?
  • What changes need to be made in order to complete this research?
  • What have you learned that might affect the way you continue?
  • Is your argument well structured and coherent?
  • Have you provided enough evidence to support a reasoned argument?
  • Have you critically evaluated this research?
  • Are there adjustments or changes that you might make to improve your essay?

INTERIM REFLECTION (max. ~150 words)

When writing the final reflection, students might reflect about any of the above questions that were discussed.

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Extended Essay: Step 3 - The Researchers Reflection Space

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  • Step 1 - Choose a subject
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  • Identify Sources
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  • Video Guides
  • Step 5 - Creating Research Questions
  • Step 6 - Outlines and Plans
  • Step 7 - Citing
  • Criteria E - 3 Reflections
  • Know Your Criteria
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  • 4000 words final hand in

What is the Researchers Reflection Space?

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Student reflection in the extended essay is critical. Effective reflection highlights the engagement of the student in an intellectual and personal process and how this has changed the student as a learner and affected the completion of that individual’s essay. For those students who have completed the Middle Years Programme, the researcher’s reflection space (RRS) can be compared to the process journal.

The IB considers this to be a central component of a successful research process as it:

supports student learning, thinking and critical analysis throughout the research process

helps to stimulate discussions between the student and supervisor

aids the reflection process.

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Location of your RRS

Anywhere that you make notes or record what you are doing to progress in your EE is your RRS.To keep it official and to make sure that we can see it you need to use two places

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The nature of the RRS

Use of the RRS is strongly recommended as it will allow the student to more clearly articulate and understand their decision-making process. It supports learning, thinking, critical analysis and evaluation, and contributes not only to the development of a successful extended essay but also to skills and competencies for pathways beyond the Diploma Programme.

The RRS is a personal learning environment that can be either a physical or virtual support tool. It is a space in which students are able to record reflections on what they are reading, writing and thinking. The use of the RRS will help students to prepare for their reflection sessions with their supervisors and inform the discussions that take place.

In preparing for their reflection sessions students could use their RRS to:

  • record their reflections
  • respond to artefacts, such as photos, newspaper clippings, twitter feeds, blogs, and so on
  • respond to prompts and questions that may arise in the students’ subject areas, TOK classes or other aspects of the Diploma Programme
  • create MindMaps ® ;
  • record emerging questions.

The RRS is an essential tool to show the process that the student took from initial ideas to the final product, thus ensuring that academic integrity can be proven.

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Extended Essay: The Viva Voce

  • Kick Off Day
  • Define Topic
  • Locate Resources
  • Annotated Bibliography
  • Evaluating Sources
  • Integrating Quotes
  • Citations & Referencing
  • Evaluation Criteria & Examiner Reports
  • Criterion A, B, C: Assessment of Research
  • Criterion D: Presentation
  • Criterion E: Engagement (Reflection)
  • The Viva Voce
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  • Language of Analysis
  • Approaches to Learning (ATL)
  • Roles and Responsibilities

Guiding questions & prompts

Engage in the Viva voce once the Extended Essay has been completed.

Consider using some of these questions to engage in rich dialogue about the learning process. Process questions - Content questions  - Personal questions

What have been the high and low points of the research and writing processes?’

What would you have done differently in the research process?

What is the most important thing that you learned?

What was your greatest challenge and how did you overcome it?

What would you change in your research if you did another EE?

How rewarding did you find the experience??

What was the most valuable experience that you took away from the process?

What was your greatest challenge and what did you do to overcome it?

What advice would you give to the next year’s group?

What IB learner profile attribute would you say helped you through the process (communicator, risk-taker, etc.)?

Would you like to continue reading on this topic?

What questions did this process raise?

What conclusions have you drawn about the topic?

What ATL skills did you develop the most through this process?

It is also acceptable to use this reflection session (partly) as a more ‘traditional’ viva to check on authenticity / depth of thinking.

Also, pick points out of the essay - ask specific questions, ask for clarifications

Key - begin and end positively.  This is the end of a long, sometimes tough, process.

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